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FUCK!

.I was in the house when that happened. It was really scary. it was raining hard and I had all candles on in the house it was bright but it was really loud to sleep with thunder and lighting shining in your faces most of all the trees fell down and it  was scary. I was with my mom and brother sister. We didn’t die but we got hurt with the trees falling on the roof..

I think there gonna die in the woods. there starving and there thirsty  there gonna try to survive there gonna jump off the cliff or the gonna  try to walk  down another way.  only if they brought money  they do for snow boarding  but only if they could get out of the woods they could buy food and drinks and  just ask for a lift. hitchhike…………….

The story is about 2 guys going to  a snowboarding hill somewhere far.They took a short cut by the woods and there was  mud and rocks and all kinds of dirty stuff.the truck flipped over a little  cliff  and they only have a little bit of food and they have to walk far and its raining they slept under the truck for the night.they walk a bit it was muddy so they tryed  to make a fire and they did got it going. there was a little bear near by them and the seen it. I think there gonna make it to  the snowboarding hill. there gonna walk  to the high way and the gonna hitch hick and someone is gonna feed them  and bring the where they wanna go.    THE END. BY:BRANDON.

On the spring break I was at home but i got a bb gun, and my cousin came over and i went to his house for  half the week when i went to go get my bb gun he got one to but he has a shot gun i got a hand gun. WE shot cars and light bulbs and its fun, one night when he came over we went outside and  i shot 2 lights and he shot 2  too, I shot stop sinces  and   windows, i shot Cans and it gose right truoght. i had a snow ball fight with my cousins and friends at my aunts house in ile-prerot i slepet there to.  I went with my friend to go get her scooter. I drove it  to go get gas..

What is the title of the story?

The title of the story is the curse of the wedding dress.

Who wrote the story?

Jenny wrote the story.

Who are the main characters?

Wendy, Charlie Are the main characters.

What else would be helpful to know about them?

her ears fell off her head.

What is the setting of the story?

It is a haunted dress so when you put it on you die.

Is there anything else you need to know about where it is taking place?

Wendy died when she put the wedding dress on.

Describe the action of the story.

The wedding dress was cursed. Like someone had the dress before her and she died In it so she bought it she put it on and she died.

What else would be helpful to know in order to better understand the story?

Wendy is the wife of Charlie

Please provide at least 2 other comments that will help the author.

Maybe She jumped off a cliff and she died.

1)What are 3 things in your life that you are not so happy with?

when i get in trouble in class, and being in this class, when i want to  go skating people are busy all the time.

2)What can you or other people do to help make them better?

just stop getting in trouble in class, and listen to the teacher, stop bugging people, i could go skating by myself,  i can ask my teacher if i can go work in the hall way.

U.s. factory’s order rise most in 5 months.

the us factory are making more metal and flattening it all for the stores and the gonna sell it for a liltel bit of money but the stores are gonna sell i for allot. the factory’s sell it nice and fresh there gonna make allot of fresh new metal to sell to all kinds of stores so they can get extra money for there new big company… i would like to work there to make nice flat metal so i can get extra money.

The curse of the golden cross there was a golden cross and if you wear it. It gives you good luck. If you don’t wear it then you get bad luck and you may die. You might have a car accident, someone could hurt you and you could fall off s cliff. You could get hurt playing hockey. If you if you leave it on for the rest of your life then your ok….

The characters: shack, jenny

Karine.

One day shack was walking and then he found a golden cross, he put it on and then  he told Karine and jenny that he found a golden cross and usually he has bad luck and he said he put it on now he has good luck so one day jenny tried to steal the golden cross so she can have good luck for the rest of he life so she stole the cross and now shack has bad luck he had an accident last week. Then Karine got mad at jenny for stealing it and then she had it in her pocket so she can’t see it, she said to Karine that she didn’t steal the golden cross. He might of lost it in the car crash… then Karine died falling of a cliff Shack die in a car crash but jenny lost it and she died. she died someone killed her and now there all dead.